third part of Graeme Hewsons review comments

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<title>Capturing Live Network Data</title>
<section id="ChCapCapturingSection"><title>Start Capturing</title>
<para>
There are two methods you can use to start capture packets with
There are two methods you can use to start capturing packets with
Ethereal:
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
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</figure>
<tip><title>Tip!</title>
<para>
If you are unsure which options to choose in this dialog box, just try to
keep the defaults as this should work well in many cases.
If you are unsure which options to choose in this dialog box, just try
keeping the defaults as this should work well in many cases.
</para>
</tip>
<para>
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<para>
This field specifies the interface you want to capture on.
You can only capture on one interface, and you can only
capture on interfaces that the Ethereal has found on the
capture on interfaces that Ethereal has found on the
system. It is a drop-down list, so simply click on the
button on the right hand side and select the interface you
want. It defaults to the first non-loopback interface that
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<para>
Enter the buffer size to be used while capturing. This is the size
of the kernel buffer which will keep the captured packets, until
they are written to disk. If you encounter packet drops, try to
increase this value.
they are written to disk. If you encounter packet drops, try
increasing this value.
</para>
<note>
<title>Note</title>
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<varlistentry><term><command>Next file every n megabyte(s)</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>
Multiple files only: Switch to the next file, after the given
Multiple files only: Switch to the next file after the given
number of byte(s)/kilobyte(s)/megabyte(s)/gigabyte(s) have been
captured.
</para>
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<varlistentry><term><command>Next file every n minute(s)</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>
Multiple files only: Switch to the next file, after the given
Multiple files only: Switch to the next file after the given
number of second(s)/minutes(s)/hours(s)/days(s) have elapsed.
</para>
</listitem>
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<varlistentry><term><command>Stop capture after n file(s)</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>
Multiple files only: Stop capturing after switched to the next
Multiple files only: Stop capturing after switching to the next
file the given number of times.
</para>
</listitem>
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<varlistentry><term><command>... after n packet(s)</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>
Stop capturing, after the given number of packets have been
Stop capturing after the given number of packets have been
captured.
</para>
</listitem>
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<varlistentry><term><command>... after n megabytes(s)</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>
Stop capturing, after the given number of
Stop capturing after the given number of
byte(s)/kilobyte(s)/megabyte(s)/gigabyte(s) have been captured.
This option is greyed out, if "Use multiple files" is selected.
</para>
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<varlistentry><term><command>... after n minute(s)</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>
Stop capturing, after the given number of
Stop capturing after the given number of
second(s)/minutes(s)/hours(s)/days(s) have elapsed.
</para>
</listitem>
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in, so you are always looking at the last packet. If you
do not specify this, Ethereal simply adds new packets onto
the end of the list, but does not scroll the packet list
pane. Greyed out, if "Update list of packets in real time"
is disabled.
pane. This option is greyed out if
"Update list of packets in real time" is disabled.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
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<para>
Working with large files (several 100 MB's) can be quite slow. If you plan
to do a long term capture or capturing from a high traffic network, think
about using one of the "Multiple files" option. This will spread the
about using one of the "Multiple files" options. This will spread the
captured packets over several smaller files which can be much more
pleasant to work with.
</para>
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report context related problems (like a stream error) and keeps information
about context related protocols (e.g. where data is exchanged at the
establishing phase and only referred to in later packets).
As it keeps these information only for the loaded file, using one of
As it keeps this information only for the loaded file, using one of
the multiple file modes may cut these contexts, If the establishing phase
is saved in one file and the things you would like to see is in another,
you might not see some of the valuable context related information.
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<section id="ChCapLinkLayerHeader"><title>Link-layer header type</title>
<para>
In the usual case, you won't have to choose this link-layer header type.
The following paragraphs will describe the exceptional cases, where
The following paragraphs describe the exceptional cases, where
selecting this type is possible, so you will have a guide what to do:
</para>
<para>
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</para>
<para>
If you are capturing on an Endace DAG card connected to an ATM network,
this might offer a choide of "RFC 1483 IP-over-ATM" or "Sun raw ATM".
this might offer a choice of "RFC 1483 IP-over-ATM" or "Sun raw ATM".
If the only traffic being captured is RFC 1483 LLC-encapsulated IP, or if
the capture needs to be read by an application that doesn't support SunATM
headers, select "RFC 1483 IP-over-ATM", otherwise select "Sun raw ATM".
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<para>
A capture filter takes the form of a series of primitive expressions
connected by conjuctions (<command>and/or</command>) and optionally
preceeded by <command>not</command>:
preceded by <command>not</command>:
<programlisting>
[not] <command>primitive</command> [and|or [not] <command>primitive</command> ...]
</programlisting>
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<listitem>
<para>
This primitive allows you to filter on a host IP
address or name. You can optionally preceed the
address or name. You can optionally precede the
primitive with the keyword <command>src|dst</command>
to specify that you are only interested in source or
destination addresses. If these are not present,
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<listitem>
<para>
This primitive allows you to filter on Ethernet host
addresses. You can optionally includethe keyword
addresses. You can optionally include the keyword
<command>src|dst</command> between the keywords
<command>ether</command> and <command>host</command>
to specify that you are only interested in source
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<listitem>
<para>
This primitive allows you to filter on network numbers.
You can optionally preceed this primitive with the
You can optionally precede this primitive with the
keyword <command>src|dst</command> to specify that you
are only interested in a source or destination network.
If neither of these are present, packets will be
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<listitem>
<para>
This primitive allows you to filter on TCP and UDP port
numbers. You can optionally preceed this primitive with
numbers. You can optionally precede this primitive with
the keywords <command>src|dst</command> and
<command>tcp|udp</command> which allow you to specify
that you are only interested in source or destination
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</para>
</note>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Pressing the accelerator keys: <command>Ctrl+E</command>.
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>The capture will be automatically stopped, if one of the
<command>Stop Conditions</command> exceeded, e.g. the maximum amount

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